In
another planet where robots were in charge there was one named Robo. One of his
hands had four fingers while the other was a light up blaster. He had torpedoes
on his shoulders. His feet and head had lasers, and on his back he had an
upgrade that made him the fastest, strongest and the most intelligent fighter
who was best at flying.
One day he had a mission to go under
water to find a key and take it to a secret cave to open a treasure chest. He
did not know how to swim or search caves. The treasure was in the cave. When he
dived in the water he found a sunken ship with holes. Robo moaned, “What should
I do?” When he looked back, he was lost in the deep ocean! The only thing he
could do is go in the ship. When he was in, it was the darkest place ever. He
had to use his blaster, but if he did that he would be trapped in the ship. The
next thing he realizes was that he was trapped because he had accidentally used
his blaster!
The ship started squeaking and he
was wobbling. He tripped over a board and fell on something sharp and crooked.
He pulled it out and it was a key. Robo swam as quickly as he could to the
surface. He found an island with one deep cave. “Could this be the cave?” Robo
thought. “This key might have something to do with the cave.” The key was
glowing. It started glowing brighter and brighter. Robo got really scared.
“Ummm”, said Robo.
He tried to go in the cave. There he saw green
eyes. It seemed as if they were approaching him. All of a sudden a giant crab
landed on his shoulders. Robo blasted his shoulder rockets at the crab. Afraid,
the crab crawled back to the sea. Now Robo ran faster than ever. He found a
glowing chest. He got closer to the chest.
Suddenly,
Robot warriors came and ambushed him. He used his weapons and attacked them.
They attacked and they battled for hours. Once Robo defeated the bad bots he
was pretty banged up. Robo walked to the glowing chest and found a lock and
opened it with the key. Inside was solid gold! Robo took the chest and went
back home. He lived happily ever after.
The End
Good Job, Shiv! I am proud of how your writing skills are getting better by the day! Keep up the good work. Very good imagination!
ReplyDeleteShivansh, Great Job! You have God given skill of writing, and expressing your thoughts. When I read your "articles" or see the pictures, you force me to jump in the story as if it is happening right now.
ReplyDeleteAbsolutely brilliant!. Do cultivate your passion and say thanks to your parents for encouraging you to follow your dreams. Say thank you to God for allowing you to glide in effortlessly in such a world wide subject of writing and reading.
And do Pray to God to keep you a very humble person just like your dad.
Blessings!
Bharat dada
Hey Shiv, Keep up the good work !!!! Amazing story writing skills. Pretty impressed with your strong "Robo". However I have a question for you.What did Robo do with his Gold chest ? Curious to know whether Gold can make Robo happy. :)
ReplyDeleteHey Shiv, eagerly waiting for more exciting stories from you !!!!
ReplyDeleteHi kaki thank you.The answer to your question is Robo bought WD40 because it was very expensive.He also bought a new suit of armor.Thanks again for the comment.
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BharatDada,
ReplyDeleteThank you very much for your comment. I felt very happy reading it. I will continue to write because this is the first part of my series.
Love, Shivansh Patel
BharatDada,
ReplyDeleteThank you very much for your comment. I felt very happy reading it. I will continue to write because this is the first part of my series.
Love, Shivansh Patel